project 2 -visual research ex2.3 – Personal experience

This exercise was mind mapped before I recorded any daily routines, I don’t really have any obvious daily routines so there was no really strong contender. I thought perhaps something I do regularly may work as a source of images, purple cabbage is a remarkable colour to play with so I recorded making sauerkraut, this didn’t seem to fit the bill however.

Neither did eating breakfast, this just seemed contrived and a bit embarrassing as well as really awkward to take photos of.

I settled on making a cup of tea, this is probably the closest I get to a routine, actually it almost approves ritual, I have recorded the process in my sketchbook in more detail.

I eventually settled on a concertina book format for the images, I tried to use a range of papers that would tell the story of the process and evoke something of an air of calm and relaxation. I used a combination of handmade papers relating to the tea ingredients, these were quite heavy so I added some airiness with drafting film, also some sections of a monoprint of a teapot and flowers . My intention is to put it in a mesh bag -like a teabag would be to stop it unravelling and to add something of the tea ritual to opening and reading it.

I do feel that actually the end product is a little clunky, using a square viewfinder to crop the images abstracts them a little and I would stick with square images but simplify the pages .

I was underwhelmed by this body of work, I was a little bit stymied by finding a routine to use, I think that this just made the work a bit forced, deciding to use a cup of tea making was the best choice for me – perhaps it’s a bit more ritual than routine, however it still seemed like hoop a jumping exercise even though I managed to find some interesting shapes in the photos that are sketched . I could enlarge and abstract the images further to find elements to pursue further.

project 2 -visual research ex2.2 identity/labels – collage

My research led me to an interview with Marcelo Montreal

https://www.photographize.co/interviews/marcelomonreal/.

He talks of the inspiration for his collages being a conversation with his mother who told him that people are made of flowers.

His work is about inner beauty. Cut outs in portraits reveal beautiful blooms beneath the public face of celebrates that he often works in collaboration with. It takes two days to produce a piece of work. In the interview he would spend much longer as he worked out what photo angles and cut marks worked.

Working with collage , I feel the tentativeness of Montreal’s early work. I enjoyed the process and can envisage using it more.

I made a decision to only use one magazine as source material along with a folder of papers that I started collecting for collage project in ATV – it pays to hoard art materials.

During the selection of images to use, I started by looking for colours but soon observed that my bigger interest was in making connections with the object I was collating, for example

-using images of hair to make the hair slides

-trees became pencils

– a tiger became sharpener

-the pen knife blade is a flower – only to be used peacefully

– key to ancestors -bone

– key to the universe =stars

– key to living in a capitalist society =gold

I found the selection process very meditative, there seemed to be a clear dialogue between me, the object, and the medium.

I documented my bag as I found it that day and was surprised more by what it lacked. The resulting drawing felt quite anonymous, different to other bags , however not particularly telling a full story, some clues to me but not a clear identity. I guess this is actually a fairly accurate summary of how we see people or situations, our own eyes cause our brains to form impressions however what is missing is a large part of the picture. We can present an image that we would like people to interpret but we can’t control what they will see. It is the same for an art work. Artistic intention may not be the same as people’s perception and this is probably ok. Before committing to glue, I played with placement of the collage pieces, this felt very cluttered, the purse hat kind of suits me though. I thought it quite clever that My sharp eyes are a sharpener made of tiger – eye of the tiger! I enjoy word play. I have a Victorinox smile. A transforming multi tool, sharp and cutting, I can open bottles with my teeth ( not really – that’s artistic license) speech is key, a key to open doors, to be understood you need to talk…..

In this orientation the knives are like little figures, whimsical, not dangerous. Bonkers!!! This clearly shows the importance of careful placement, I moved swiftly onto crazy head dress/hairwhile making the larger iteration of the owl – the universal /ancestral owl I cut a shape from a wolf image, I noticed that serendipitously fitted my face, I became wolf girl!what a fierce transformation. I think it looks quite complete as a simple collage of two shapes.e

I played some more and then committed the shapes with glue to produce this portrait.

Having selected the items from my bag that I resonated with most I think that this probably says more about me than the contents of my bag drawing which contained mostly utilitarian objects, a penknife shows my preparedness for every opportunity, my just in case spirit of girl guide, trying to do my best.

I love that a pen knife (it is a tiny 40mm) that transforms can be transformed to wolf or human or owl depending on the rotation. in my sketch book I wrote a little about owls and ancestry. A relative used to raise birds of prey for wildlife parks and I got to hand feed them so there is another link there. Making multiples of owls of varying sizes to show a succession of ovum’s passed through the generations was the line of thought here. I was so absorbed by this process I think I got a little mad!

The final collage image reflects the work of Marcelo Montreal. One eye to the future , one to the past. There are some really interesting repeating shapes and smooth transitions – the beak/nose for example. I’m pleased with the hand/claws holding the keys. The wing echos my face shape on the left while the owl face sits well with the right eye socket.

https://www.textileartist.org/melissa-zexter-interview-embroidered-photography

i played around a little with digital manipulation of my completed wolf girl collage

Obviously in the early days of collage computer manipulation wasn’t possible. This is crossing the boundaries into photography/graphic design/computer graphics and many artists are working successfully with these mediums. I definitely engage more with a hands on process.

project 2 -visual research ex2.1

Ex 2.1 Identity/labels – line drawing

Continuous line drawing is unnerving, however I think that the quality of drawing is really interesting.

The first couple of drawings are of the whole drinking bottle, I felt that the top half was more interesting so I just focused on the lid. Not retracing lines forced me to decide which part of the object to draw next, this decision really informs which bit of the drawing is recognisable! I found some interesting shapes in the two overlapping drawings bottom middle

There’s something about the cylindrical pencil sharpener drawings that reminds me of Picasso. Cubists portraits!

The teabag drawing is more interesting to me, perhaps I was getting more in tune to the process. I took it out of the sachet to get a more interesting object to draw. I hit on an object that really suited the process. The last one I drew resembles a wire drawing. I am reminded of the wire sculptures by Jeanette Orrell. I would like to make two wire teabags, one 3D and one as a flat drawing to compare them, I find the juxtaposition of flat drawings representing objects interesting related too wire sculptures representing a drawing….

I realise that I’ve used a biro for all drawings (suggested in the coursenotes)

I made a wire drawing based , flat and linear rather than a 3D sculptural shape. Mounted on teabag paper.

I would like to experiment with scale – it seemed natural to work sort of to scale but I should try a large drawing or a tiny version to explore that eye – through brain – to drawing implement connection.

Using a chunky graphite pencil will be fun, I’m also interested to use charcoal -I think that it will inevitably smudge which may make interesting marks.

I am reminded of the wire sculptures by Jeanette Orrell

I approached this task in a very straight forward way, I felt that the little penknife with the implements extended would work well. It gives many possible rotation points. I like the analogous colour scheme, obviously this has endless possibilities. Perhaps the nail file and bottle opener makes the image quite busy. The paper was a little absorbent for the pens, I sort of like the slight fuzziness, I am reminded of the multi coloured shadows at a well lit gig..

There’s a lot of stuff in my bag, it came as some surprise that’s there’re no bits of nature as generally when I empty my bag it’s full of twigs and leaves – I’m not sure what this collection says about me. It’s got a lot of useful stuff in it though! I used a roll of paper so that I wouldn’t run out of room. The objects a loosely grouped with similar items together. If you play spot the difference it will be observed that my phone is missing from the photo as it is also my camera!

Elise Engler Everything in my bag. Is an account , a snapshot of what Engler had in her bag on a particular day. From that we can presume to sleuth like read something about her. A sharing. I’m not sure.

I documented my bag as I found it that day and was surprised more by what it lacked. The resulting drawing felt quite anonymous, different to other bags , however not particularly telling a full story, some clues to me but not a clear identity. I guess this is actually a fairly accurate summary of how we see people or situations, our own eyes cause our brains to form impressions however what is missing is a large part of the picture. We can present an image that we would like people to interpret but we can’t control what they will see. It is the same for an art work. Artistic intention may not be the same as people’s perception and this is probably ok.

Research point 2.1

This research task is quite a leap from previous research tasks.

I’m happy with the critical evaluation of a painting or piece of artists work, however struggled with the structure of juggling so many many artists and themes.

Artists inspired by music https://www.wqxr.org/story/200394-top-five-musically-inspired-paintings-new-york/

https://www.vice.com/en_us/article/gyxq73/melissa-mccracken-synesthesia-painter-interview

http://magazine.art21.org/2010/12/07/music-and-art/#.XP7OkIrTWfA

https://digitalcommons.unl.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1055&context=sheldonpubs

Martin Creed https://youtu.be/aG41M6lYNRM

It is clear that Pinterest is a really accessible way of searching for visual references, however it takes more time than you realise to follow links to dead ends repeatedly. ‘Fact checking’ and referencing is an issue, it is actually better use of time to research via artist websites , or gallery websites – which tend to have more useful background information than artist statements on websites – these are often not available.

Pinterest is really useful to get an overview images of artists work, information links about techniques, and researching to a theme, following links to artists work/techniques that are similar.

I found watching videos of artist interviews a really accessible way of learning about artists. I haven’t yet found the best way for me to deal with the technicalities of recording and presenting information. For this research task I have used Microsoft office notes app to gather images, information and website links. I have printed them out to annotate and analyse in my sketch book to see if it is quicker for me than working directly into the WordPress app – my computer seems to be dramatically slowing down unfortunately, I have a problem with adding images from the internet. There’s a ghost in the machine, or a gremlin or an age related break down

Elise Engler

Drawing as documentary. I felt her work was very whimsical. Drawings of everything in her bag, contents of women’s handbags, contents of fire trucks, etc

https://www.roberthenrycontemporary.com/artists/elise-engler/statement

In her artist statement I found that she also documents fallen soldiers (killed – why do we say fallen?) and ‘Collateral Damage documents civilian casualties, mainly Iraqi. Pencil silhouettes are filled in with white pencil, many identified by name/ age. Over 21,000 figures have been drawn so far, a tiny fraction of the reality

This is a far more serious endeavour, Engler sees herself as an anthropologist or archaeologist. Observing humanity.

Claude Heath

https://drawingroom.org.uk/events/workshop-3-drawing-making-making-drawing-with-claude-heath

Tracey Emin- identity/personal experience

Cy Twombly –

Jenny Saville

Michael Craig-Martin – based on place

Claude Heath

Fred Sandback

Jan Dibbets

Feedback assignment 1

 

Summary of tutorial discussion

 

Demonstration of technical and visual skills, quality of outcome, demonstration of creativity

 

Techniques to help you complete on time:

I understand that parts of this assignment were difficult for you to start. You need to have a way to make decisions and just get on with it . We discussed using the decision making as an interesting maybe conceptual way of working rather seeing it as a problem. So choosing things blind, tossing a die. As you are pushed for time it is important that you can crack on with your work. Obviously there still needs to be time for reflection but not procrastination!

It’s interesting, this feeling of being frozen by a looming deadline is a state that I feel could be a really interesting line of inquiry – if I had the time ……. my procrastination is partly full on procrastination but a large amount is brain chemicals, shifting hormones and sadness, my brain processing internal and external change, it’s been a s**t year all in all.

However the wrk needs doing and I’m determined -just need to get the momentum going…

 

It is important that you answer what is being asked of you, make sure that you complete all the tasks. It felt a little thin in parts and there was one part missing 1.4.

1.4 was a sticking point, I’m now waiting for the release of The Lost Words: Spell Songs

Macfarlane, Robert . This is a cd of songs inspired by Macfarlanes investigation into 50 nature words that are removed from the children’s Oxford English Dictionary.
I think that I took the tasks too literally and will try to achieve more depth in future exercises. My recording of ideas needs to be clearer, a balance between analysing all my sketch book notes whilst avoiding repetition on the blog and not getting too sidetracked.

 

Really consider your research and what it can provide for each assignment. If you get stuck within an assignment you might need to revise the research and expand on ideas or go deeper.

This idea of back tracking to provide more inspiring research to use in the project tasks is really important – it will stop me wasting time agonising about how to make thing fit, and will save time in the long run.

 

Your work could be more conceptual? You enjoyed the method of working in mixed media which is not theme based. Working with materials and developing processes. You could push this method of working more, maybe developing a narrative more than a theme. For example on the journey you could be walking and recording materials, picking up materials as you go. Looking at what materials lay with each other, can they be broken as you walk on them, do they change form. Do they change from morning to evening, do other people interact with them …….( I just looked at 1.1 it is clear to me that you really enjoy materials, the work you have analysed from mixed media is stronger than your new sample for this assignment. This is because you are not trying to create a “picture” but you are simply working with materials and forms and then documenting them. In this new piece you are trying to make the materials represent a landscape / picture which is not so honest or exciting.  We can discuss this next time we talk but please reflect on this point for your next assignment. )

This is excellent – really clarifying. I loved MMT and found the materials led approach really suited my inquisitive nature. Project one of I&P felt quite forced but thanks to this feedback I think that I’m understanding how to move forward and approach it in a way that is more natural to me. Narrative and context are important to me.

 

Your bird sample was very interesting ( and works as a narrative / conceptual idea) but how could this have been developed further?

I also felt that mapping the bird flight paths in my garden was more exciting, when I get my sketch book back I will see if I can implement some of the ideas that I noted. I’m particularly interested in exploring how I can invoke my crow friends in a ark making exercise using a back drawing process and peanuts. If it works it would be interesting to produce a series with some consistent approach combined with random elements, time of day, number of peanuts etc

 

Experimentation and developing your own personal voice:

You work could be more experimental. You could be using a larger variety of materials. All your work is a similar shape and size. Go bigger or much smaller.

This excites me, I felt constricted by size for example on the interpretation of music Woking on A3 but felt compelled to follow the instructions! This will be part o f my rewinding process. I will refine my inner grrr and run free!!!

 

We discussed  that you could be thinking about how you bring your own interests and skills into each assignment. I think you would then enjoy the assignments more? For example you really enjoyed mixed media, you enjoy working with materials so when you completed the last task you could have drawn or printed on wooden veneers to see what effect that gave.

 

Context, reflective thinking, critical thinking, analysis

 

I found your Blog difficult to navigate i didn’t realise i had to start at the bottom of page 2 and work my way up. Is it possible to have it so the first page opening up is the first part of the assignment etc…..

I’m not sure what happened there! I have worked out how to put more posts on each page so that issue should be dealt with. I have set up draft posts for the entire course so they should appear in order I think. I’ve also worked out the categories so hopefully my blog will read more clearly. Currently I’m not sure if I need to (or how to)change theme to improve clarity. WordPress still keeps its secrets well

 

There needs to be more reflection on what you are doing and also what you have chosen not to do and why.

I suggest once you have finished the piece you are working on stand back from it and critique it. What is working and what could you improve on. What were you trying to achieve and have you succeeded. Note down your comments.

 You could record your reflections verbally and then write down the key points.

 I’m going to try using voice memos to help me . My typing is getting quicker slowly. I’ve made a prompt card to refer to when self evaluating based on critical thinking skills workshop.

You need to present your work more clearly for assessment. Labels with assignment points on each.

This was lazy of me as I literally threw assignment one in the post and then found the how to send work to your tutor for assessment. I can see how feedback will be helped by clearer labelling of work.

 

Well done, I look forward to your next assignment.